Poem. Kevin Toscano & Juanita Trujillo
Stupidity
People say America is just so wonderful and a jubilate place.
But some administrations discredit the value of the country.
Past and present Government Officials doing things behind our backs, taking us for chumps.
The suppose 'War on Terror' is so deplore.
Stupefying little kids as to it's actually purpose.
So many people censure the already lost Iraqi War, but the Government doesn't listen.
Stupidity of the Government.
The world we know has gone through many changes.
Bloodshed marks our history; perpetual fighting between ourselves.
Instead of making friends with one another, we suppressed each other.
Adolf Hitler, Benito Mussolini lauding their people; believing them supreme.
Genocide of the Jewish people, and domination of the Aryan race.
American's, European's, Hispanic's, Asian's.
We don't live in a homogeneous world, but we can stop our hatred.
Stupidity of the Leaders.
Living a long and healthy life can be done.
But smoking, AIDs, driving and global warming nullifies it.
Destruction of the Earth, as if it was our playground.
Gas pollution from cars and spontaneous death relating to deleterious toxic.
People oblivion to recycling, crippling our o-zone.
An incessant number of oddities, happening around us.
Stupidity of the people.
Children are born good, just made demonic.
Small words and phases, which are hackneyed, and seem cute.
Replicas of their parents when they were young.
Smoking, drinking and drugs entangle their minds as they grow.
Ironically finding it cool because the television shows it.
Troublesome children; household becomes discordant, stability crumbles.
Stupidity of the media.
Humans walking so nonchalant, unaware of what is dying around them.
Black and White Pandas, Green Turtles and ferrets dying out.
The incontrovertible truth that one day soon we won’t see them anymore.
Shooting rings, and animals killing for fun.
Hanging the head of the hunted on the walls.
Oh how ostentatious to them.
Stupidity of the Gun users.
Peace and harmony; international laws.
Be perceptive of other races and their cultures and to venerate.
Crack down on drugs dealers.
Embellish the harm it can do to ones self.
Eco-friendly fuel for cars.
Supervision of the people of the future.
Animal protection rights, preservation centers, and awareness.
Amicable of everyone.
People say America is just so wonderful and a jubilate place.
But some administrations discredit the value of the country.
Past and present Government Officials doing things behind our backs, taking us for chumps.
The suppose 'War on Terror' is so deplore.
Stupefying little kids as to it's actually purpose.
So many people censure the already lost Iraqi War, but the Government doesn't listen.
Stupidity of the Government.
The world we know has gone through many changes.
Bloodshed marks our history; perpetual fighting between ourselves.
Instead of making friends with one another, we suppressed each other.
Adolf Hitler, Benito Mussolini lauding their people; believing them supreme.
Genocide of the Jewish people, and domination of the Aryan race.
American's, European's, Hispanic's, Asian's.
We don't live in a homogeneous world, but we can stop our hatred.
Stupidity of the Leaders.
Living a long and healthy life can be done.
But smoking, AIDs, driving and global warming nullifies it.
Destruction of the Earth, as if it was our playground.
Gas pollution from cars and spontaneous death relating to deleterious toxic.
People oblivion to recycling, crippling our o-zone.
An incessant number of oddities, happening around us.
Stupidity of the people.
Children are born good, just made demonic.
Small words and phases, which are hackneyed, and seem cute.
Replicas of their parents when they were young.
Smoking, drinking and drugs entangle their minds as they grow.
Ironically finding it cool because the television shows it.
Troublesome children; household becomes discordant, stability crumbles.
Stupidity of the media.
Humans walking so nonchalant, unaware of what is dying around them.
Black and White Pandas, Green Turtles and ferrets dying out.
The incontrovertible truth that one day soon we won’t see them anymore.
Shooting rings, and animals killing for fun.
Hanging the head of the hunted on the walls.
Oh how ostentatious to them.
Stupidity of the Gun users.
Peace and harmony; international laws.
Be perceptive of other races and their cultures and to venerate.
Crack down on drugs dealers.
Embellish the harm it can do to ones self.
Eco-friendly fuel for cars.
Supervision of the people of the future.
Animal protection rights, preservation centers, and awareness.
Amicable of everyone.
posted by Juanita @ 4:36 PM
5 Comments:
At June 3, 2008 at 1:51 PM ,
J. Nagamootoo English 6 Blog said...
Very creative and original. Used maximum SAT words and we loved your title.
- Jessica & Tylah
At June 3, 2008 at 6:08 PM ,
Stanley Switalski said...
Your poem was ingenious. I loved how you had covered all the controversial issues that the American society faces everyday. That, I feel, was truly creative. The only constructive criticism that I can find is that your grammar is not spot on. There are a few words here and there that are not in the proper tense (such as administrations, should be administrators). However, this did not hinder your overall performance and for that, I think you guys had an exceptional performance.
At June 3, 2008 at 9:16 PM ,
Anonymous said...
DELIVERY:
The speaker delivers the message in a confident, poised, enthusiastic fashion. The volume and rate varies to add emphasis and interest. Pronunciation and enunciation are very clear. The speaker exhibits very few disfluencies, such as 'ahs,' 'uhms,' or 'you knows.'
OMG! Your poem was so well done. I really agreed especially the stanza with the animals. I TOTALLY AGREE! And I also think it was very original and people should stop their stupidity-ness (?) GOOD JOB GUYS! =)
At June 4, 2008 at 5:38 PM ,
D Delcarpio English 6 said...
DELIVERY:
The speaker delivers the message in a confident, poised, enthusiastic fashion. The volume and rate varies to add emphasis and interest. Pronunciation and enunciation are very clear. The speaker exhibits very few disfluencies, such as 'ahs,' 'uhms,' or 'you knows.'
Your presentation was really clever, on how you were able to cover the aspects in which the american society faces now a days.
good job
At June 8, 2008 at 3:28 PM ,
Ana English Blog said...
I loved your poem. It was very creative how after every verse you guys would write whos' or what stupidity it was, very clever, I enjoyed your presentation
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